This is a bit of a shameless self promotion, but for what I feel is a good reason. I started this story back in December, around the time that FoE was drawing to a close. It was published to EqD before I moved it to FiM Fiction (where it admittedly got a LOT more exposure).
My main reason for posting a topic here was because I'm looking for more in depth feedback. While the responses have all been positive thus far, not too many of them go into detail. As a writer who is always striving to improve, I always look for feedback that is as detailed as possible. I like to know specifically what my readers like, dislike, want to see more or less of, or even things that just bug them personally.
The story itself is framed as a book written by Ditzy Doo, chronicling her 200 years in the Equestrian Wasteland between the destruction of Cloudsdayle and the main FoE story, sort of like a set of memoirs. You can find it here http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6663/Fallout-Equestria%3A-The-Ditzy-Doo-Chronicles.
Thanks in advance to anypony who reads it and provides feedback.
General discussion about the wonderful Fallout: Equestria side stories.
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